SWA: Task

After having read my peers evaluation on my paper, I learned that my weaknesses throughout my paper are small sentence errors and that I need to add just a little bit more information to make it better. Some suggestions made by my peers include adding more examples to some of my paragraphs and really specifying some parts of my paper. Another is to fix my conclusion to really make it a solid conclusion. For the most part I do agree with their comments. I really do find peer revisions helpful because it has the opinions and corrections from some one else's view. For my paper I definately will use some of their revisions to fix my paper, but there are some "corrections" that I do not find to be necessary. The main one being to add more information to sentences that I do not believe need it.