Virtual Peer Review Script

1.       What I like most about your paper is your personal experience on how social media and interaction over the internet have affected your literacy. Reading your experience made me reflect and realize that the use of internet has impacted the way I write as well.
   2.      Based off of the thesis I am able to tell that the paper is going to be about your personal experiences and how they have influenced your literacy.  After having read your paper your thesis is very clear and it creates a layout for the paragraphs that you used in your paper. You fulfill all of the requirements, except for two which I will explain next.
   3.      Some things to add to your paper to fulfill the requirements would be to add an introductory paragraph that tells us a little about yourself and a paragraph at the end that will tell us how you plan to use literacy after school.
   4.      Each of your paragraphs discusses only one idea, and everything in the paragraph is related to that specific idea.
   5.      Overall I like the personal experiences that you chose to put in your thesis. Your paper is structured well based off of your thesis and the paragraphs are clear. As I had mentioned above, just include an introductory paragraph and a paragraph at the end. Besides that it would be good to add where you stand right now on literacy; for example whether you enjoy reading and writing.